There are places that remain in our memories, the details may become slightly blurred, nostalgia may colour our thoughts, but they don’t fade. And how those places made us feel at the time is the one thing that remains.
Today I’m really pleased to welcome Teagan Ríordáin Geneviene, who is going to tell us about what first occurred to her when I invited her to remember one of the places that has remained in her memory, and how it made her feel.
Hi, Judith. Thanks very much for allowing me to participate in this series. My mind works in twisting ways. The kind of memory I’ve chosen to share may seem strange. However, the first thing that came to mind when you asked me about this topic was old amusement parks.
When I was a small child there was an amusement park in the next town, which was slightly “less small” than my hometown. To my shock, visitors from real cities scoffed at it. I thought it was utterly magical. Not long after that, we visited a carnival in the mountains, and even to my tween self, that one was ragtag. Getting on the rides was… questionable to say the least. By the time I was in my teens, back at the local amusement park, I could see the truth of how small, and how rundown it actually was.
The park didn’t create magic for me anymore. Rather, it gave me a feeling I could only describe as otherworldly. That sensation stuck with me and I’ve used “strange” amusement parks in two of my books. One is a work in progress that I’ve stopped and started several times over the past few years. The defunct amusement park is a central figure of that story.
The other is “Hullaba Lulu, a Dieselpunk Adventure.” On that magical train-ride, one of the places Lulu and her friends land in is a “sideways” version of Atlantic City in the 1920s. To Lulu’s surprise, admittance is paid in cheeseburgers. Although it’s not all whimsy. In fact, it’s downright sinister.
Here’s a snippet where Lulu and Pearl have gotten separated from their friend Rose. Pearl found a fortuneteller automaton:
“Go ahead, Lulu! Ask it a question. It gave me ‘the lovers’ card,” Pearl enthused.
“You always ask about love, and they always tell you that you’ll find it. I never know what to ask,” I complained.
“Okay, then, gypsy king. Here’s my question. How is the Loop the Loop still here when it was taken down in 1912?” I asked in a snarky tone.
The gypsy’s flat mechanical eyes shifted to me with a click. There couldn’t be life behind those eyes. It couldn’t really see me… but I felt like he looked right through me.
“Did we go back in time?” I added in a softer voice.
The automaton sat motionless for a heartbeat. Something about the sudden change in clockwork movement gave me the heebie-jeebies.
The gypsy gathered the tarot cards and spread them again. It drew out a card with a drawing of a man hanging by his foot. The fortuneteller moved the card so that the man was laying down.
“Sideways,” was all the automaton said.
“We didn’t move north or south, or forward or backward…” I began.
“Sideways,” it repeated with a mechanical nod.
I gave a frustrated sigh. Why couldn’t the blasted thing be useful? I turned to Pearl and asked her where Rose was. My fair-haired friend shrugged, then she giggled and asked the fortuneteller the question.
“Where is our friend, Rose?”
The gypsy automaton gathered the tarot cards, spread them, and turned over the Three of Swords. The design on the card was like the leaflet I found in the automat. There was an image of a heart pierced by three swords. Pearl and I both shuddered at the gruesome picture. My worry had rubbed off on her. She gave her long hair an anxious twist.
“Betrayal,” the fortuneteller said.
The air was split by a loud scream. The sound echoed around the amusement park.
“Rose?” I yelled.
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That’s only the beginning of the strangeness Lulu finds at the amusement park. Wait until she gets to the Tilt-A-Whirl…
Sometimes memories go into our heads. After they’ve been stored for a while, there’s no telling how they’ll come back out. They might even get sideways.
Judith, thank you again for inviting me. It’s been a delight. I’m including my links. I hope your readers will check out my blog, and follow me on my Amazon Author page. Hugs on the wing!
I’m sure they will, Teagan. And thank you for participating in Places in our Memories.
Amazon Author Page: relinks.me/TeaganRiordainGeneviene
Hullaba Lulu, universal purchase links:
Kindle: relinks.me/B08JKP1RS4
Paperback: relinks.me/B08JDYXPZM
Blog (Teagan’s Books): Teagan’s Books – Founder of the Three Things Method of Storytelling (teagansbooks.com)
About Teagan:
In addition to the “Author Tool Chest” of non-fiction works, Teagan Ríordáin Geneviene writes whimsical and humorous stories. She also writes high fantasy, urban fantasy, steampunk, and mysteries with historic settings. Yes, that’s a variety of genres. However, you will always find a sense of whimsy in what she writes. It’s just that sometimes it takes a more serious form.
Teagan’s work is colored by the experiences of her early life in the southern states and later in the desert southwest, as well as a decade in Washington, DC.
When did Teagan get serious about writing? She had always devoured mysteries and fantasy novels of every type. Then one day there was no new book at hand for reading — so she decided to write one. She hasn’t stopped writing since.
Dear Judith, thanks again. Your invitation was a wonderful surprise. Hugs on the wing!
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You are so welcome, Teagan. It’s a long time since we first met online so, as I did with Sally, I wanted to hear your memories early in this series. Yours are both lovely, and poignant. Thank you for being here. x
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My pleasure. I forgot to mention (ironic, given the “memory” topic, LOL) I’ll reblog this as my midweek post either Wednesday or Thursday. ❤
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Brilliant! I’ll look out for it, Teagan. I’ve put it in the diary, in case I forget!!! x
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My slow Internet and WordPress are not cooperating with me regarding images… I’ll email you a link to the post when I’m able to get it scheduled. It will be Thursday, so I can give you exposure to the popular “Thursday Doors” blog hop. 🙂
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Oh, what a pain!! But thank you, for Thursday !! x
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Fab, thanks so much for featuring Teagan. Good luck ladies, and have as great week.
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Thank you so much for dropping by to comment, Jane. I found Teagan’s post fascinating. Hope your week is a productive and pleasant one, as well.
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Thanks so much. Happy days x
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Thank you kindly. Hugs.
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Another very different and fascinating take on Judith’s prompt! I loved the excerpt and must pull Teagan’s book nearer the top of my TBR mountain! Many thanks to both of you. ♥♥
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Oh, Teagan, your musings on amusement parks brought smiles regarding the Bob-Lo Park we used to attend when I was a child. At that time, it was thriving and thrilling. When I went back as an adult, it was like visiting the aging beauty queen whose slip was showing. ❤
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What a wonderful comment, Annette!! Thank you so much for reading Teagan’s musing. And brilliant that it brings back memories for you. x
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I love your description, Annette. Heartfelt thanks for spending part of your day here. Hugs on the wing.
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I am not surprised that it’s an amusement park that sparked memories for Teagan. I remember the amusement park in Hullaba Lulu, a book I enjoyed. Cheers to both of you. xo
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Thanks for introducing to Teagan’s secrets experiences with amusing parks. I have to admit i never visited such a park, and what one can find here in Germany is beside some bigger ones in the North of the country not very desirable to visit. So i have to wait for a visit in the USA. :-)) xx Michael
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I always loved that part about the cheeseburgers with Lulu, Teagan. There was an amusement park fairly close to us when I was growing up, and I always remembered it as being huge and such fun. Later as an adult, I saw it again and realized just how small it was, lol. Thanks for hosting, Judith!
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Thank you, Teri. I never went to an amusement park as a child, so it’s been interesting to read Teagan’s post, and the comments. Thank you for dropping by. Memories, as an adult, are always so different, aren’t they? x
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LOL, Lulu had quite an appetite, Teri. 😀 I think I craved cheeseburgers throughout the writing of that story! Lucky for me that no fast-food places were convenient to me.
The real world memory had a rather sinister aspect. At the mountain park, my older cousin was flirting with a man who operated one ride, and he seemed… unattractive and “sketchy” to me, though she was very taken with him. (He had a nephew my age called Junebug. The things one remembers!) Anyhow the feeling that something was off about that entire carnival must have made me look at the hometown amusement park through a different lens, even though I was far from being an adult.
Thanks for reading and commenting. Hugs on the wing.
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It is hard to forget your first trip to an amusement park! I can see how that’s influenced Teagan’s writing!
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A brilliantly clever follow-on, Teagan. Love it!! x
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What a great idea for a series, Judith. Teagan’s imagination has no limits, and her mind works in strange ways, but I can see why an amusement park would trigger memories. I do remember a couple in my city (one is still going, although it is a pretty ancient one, but the other one disappeared years back), and my perspective on them did change over my lifetime. But I do prefer them to the new ones, I think. They feel more personal and less soul-less. And dear Lulu, is always a pleasure to be reminded of her. And I think I remember the story Teagan is referring to as well. An inspiring topic and a great post. Thanks, Judith and Teagan.
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Thank you so much, Olga, I’m thrilled you like the idea for this series. You are quite right, how we see amusement parks does depend on our ages, as well as the circumstances when we visit them. Teagan’s post took a totally different slant on the places we remember, and I love it. It is brilliant to be reminded of Lulu here. xx
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You are so kind, Judith — thank you for this comment. ❤
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Yes, that would be the story you’re thinking of, Olga. I’m flattered that you remember is, since I rarely talk about it.
I agree about old amusement parks. Your description of “soulless” is perfect for the new ones, to me. Thanks so much for visiting both places, and for all your support. Hugs on the wing.
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I see that my original comment didn’t get through, Olga (WordPress gremlins are always hungry). Anyhow, thank you again, and yes that is the story you are thinking of. Hugs on the wing.
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I get the feeling we might get to hear more about it in the future, Teagan. Have a great weekend!
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Teagan Geneviene visits Judith Barrow’s blog and shares some places in her memories, and a fragment from one of the stories. Don’t miss it!
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Teagan’s memory of the amusement park perfectly captures the reasonI find amusement parks creepy and depressing. They give me the heebie-jeebies.
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Judith, thank you for featuring Teagan, and for letting us learn a little more about what drives the whimsy and plots in her delightful stories.
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How great you could use those memories in your books, Teagan. We had an old hotel, closed down, that we (the neighborhood kids) used to ‘visit’ when I was probably in Middle School. I used the memory of that in one of my books! Things always look smaller and more real when we grow up!
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Thanks for sharing your memories, Teagan and thanks Judith for hosting Teagan.
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Thank you for dropping by to comment, John. It’s much appreciated. x
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You are so kind to visit both posts, John — thank you. Have a brilliant weekend. Hugs on the wing.
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Hi Judith, Hi Teagan, this is a most entertaining post. You can always rely on Teagan to come up with something amazing and special. A fabulous memory of a an amusement park. I enjoyed Hullaba Lulu very much.
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Fabulous post, Judith, thanks for featuring Teagan. Her imagination and talent is never-ending! The main amusement park I recall going to as a child (living 5 minutes away) is Disneyland. 🙂 Congrats to Teagan for the wonderful feature, too! 💞
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A wonderful write, Teagan!
Thank you for Places in our Memories, Judith!
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It’s been a pleasure to host Teagan here with her memories, Resa. Thank you so much for /dropping by and commenting.
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Welcome! I quite enjoy Teagan’s blog, and her vivid imagination!
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Huge thanks for visiting, Resa. You’re always the cat’s pajamas! 🐱
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Trying again, I think some of my comments are going to spam. Anyhow, thanks so very much, Resa. Big hugs!
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I’ll check it, |Teagan.
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